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The Cleanup page is a place where articles with problems (ungrammatical, poorly formatted, confusing, etc.) can be listed. Any user can fix or list articles here. Feel free to make use of the Cleanup resources.

Older cleanup: Category:Cleanup by month. Pages are archived by month, but are still in need of cleanup (or de-listing if they have already been cleaned up).

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Just to let everyone know, there were 16,569 articles tagged for cleanup as of 2 July 2006. This means that we are working on 1.35% of English Wikipedia's articles. Most of these articles can be found under Category:Cleanup by month and are not listed below. Anything you can do to help clear the backlog would be greatly appreciated.

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July 2006

July 17, 2006

  • Bob Tur and Los Angeles News Service have the same text for the majority of the article. One article needs to be deleted, or they need to be merged, or one article needs to be completely rewritten.
  • Mariano Cardinal Rampolla needs some tweeking/development (and if someone knows more about the papal veto can they please develop the area) Jackiespeel 21:57, 17 July 2006 (UTC)
  • Pancharatna Kritis - Needs to be moved to Wikisource, or rewritten in a more encyclopedic style. --Skal 20:04, 17 July 2006 (UTC)
  • Valerophenone - unwikified, possibly copied from somewhere. Only contains a malformated table of the compound's properties. - Mike Rosoft 10:48, 17 July 2006 (UTC)
  • Waste minimisation- bit long and drawn out, needs to be wikified and improved.
    • Self-undescriptive? ;) Jackiespeel 21:52, 17 July 2006 (UTC)

July 15, 2006

  • The Ren and Stimpy Show - Much improvement is needed in spots. (Ibaranoff24 23:17, 15 July 2006 (UTC))
  • Alexandra Roos - The article seems to have potential, but there is no context established at this time for the article to be called a stub. --Spring Rubber 19:24, 15 July 2006 (UTC)
  • Portal (1986 computer game) - Needs wikifying and categorisation. Could do with more information to form a Infobox CVG. - HahncheneHahnchen 15:05, 15 July 2006 (UTC)
    • Did some wikifying, added info-box and removed some POV. The article still needs some help from someone more familiar with the game or genre.--Woden325 18:20, 15 July 2006 (UTC)
  • Clunia - This appears to be almost entirely a paper of some sort, anonymously contributed. I'm hoping (but not certain) that the anon who submitted it is, indeed the person who wrote it (impossible to make an educated guess, because there are no other edits from that IP address, so nothing to compare to). Utterly not in Wikipedia style, has POV issues, not wikified, etc. - Jmabel | Jmabel 22:34, 15 July 2006 (UTC)

July 14, 2006

  • Cook Islands Maori does not conform to the standards of other language articles; talk about what Ethnologue describes as multiple languages.
  • Palmersville, Tennessee has been listed since June 12, 2006. That article does not use the same format as other cities and towns with Wikipedia articles, and lacks information on the town's population. --67.67.140.211 22:05, 14 July 2006 (UTC)
  • A user has been repeatedly removing the cleanup tag at Cook Islands Maori, but it still needs cleanup. Mo-Al 17:06, 14 July 2006 (UTC)
  • Universitario de Deportes - Very messy. The famous players list is way too long and needs to be reduced. Also there are different 'versions' of famous players lists that don't make sense (heroes, other famous players, recent famous players etc.). Several external links seem unnecessary. Bruno18 20:35, 14 July 2006 (UTC)
  • Devon Aoki needs a rather extensive general cleanup. --Atratus 03:01, 15 July 2006 (UTC)

July 13, 2006

  • Tongan language I don't think this is quite bad enough to get a tag, but it does need some help. Mo-Al 05:26, 14 July 2006 (UTC)
  • Revels A special plea to BOSTONIANS.
I've just cleaned up a messy disambig page, and turned it into a stub about Langstaff's Revels. There is urgent need for additioanl information, history, cities in which a Revels group is running, and so on. And, importantly, perhaps an audio clip? And some images from performances? Such an article is just the sort of thing WP can do well, while the paper folk can't. See the talk page for suggestions. Please help. Thanks. (here at suggestion of Ref Desk) Ww 19:33, 13 July 2006 (UTC)

  • Word Of Life - messy. needs wikifying, categorizing, etc. Perhaps it should also be moved or renamed. Currently, Word of Life (small "o", which seems to be the correct spelling *) is a redirect to Livets Ord. Entheta 22:55, 12 July 2006 (UTC)

  • Bad Love - this article about Randy Newman's most recent album of original songs not only needs an infobox, but it could use some wikifying and removal of off-topic information, such as Newman's work with film scores which is either off-topic or needs to be made on-topic more effectively. JnB987 02:17, 13 July 2006 (UTC)

July 12, 2006

  • High School Musical - Page has been edited many times within the course of two weeks. It neesds to be cleaned up and made sure that it isn't confusing with content. (Geomapboy2 05:41, 12 July 2006 (UTC))
  • Jack Coughlin - Good content, good potential, but needs to be cleaned up. -- Missilepenguin! 17:10, 12 July 2006 (UTC)missilepenguin

July 11, 2006

  • Fritz the Cat (film) - Nice article as is, but I'd like it to be featured-article quality. (Ibaranoff24 20:16, 11 July 2006 (UTC))
  • List of stars by constellation - No stars listed here, just a List of constellations, another page which already exists. This article should have star tables from all constellations' articles. --Kreachure 17:16, 11 July 2006 (UTC)
  • Philosophy of environment -- Seems to have significant translation issues. As it stands it's very hard to understand what exactly is being conveyed. Needs significant copyediting --Daduzi Daduzi 14:55, 11 July 2006 (UTC)
  • Kishore Kumar -- The writing doesn't sound at all as if it's from an encyclopedia. There are many instances in which needed punctuation isn't there and the writing sounds like a conversation.
  • Pierre-Claude Foucquet needs to be checked for correct english
  • Wesley College, Colombo Data dump about a school in Sri Lanka, including long lists of "distinguished students" and teachers. Needs simultaneous trimming and expanding, but in different areas.

July 10, 2006

  • Teaching English as a Foreign Language -- No category, smells like SPAM, needs attention and expansion... also wikify to other see also topics.
  • Something For Kate -- The information is correct but the page is really badly formatted and it needs images.
  • Polish Catholic Church -- article appears to be a machine assisted translation of the Polish Wikipedia page, and need significant attention from someone who speaks the lanugage, or is aware of the context.
  • CTL -- The definition given is wrong. The article mixes CTL and CTL*.
This is a dab page. -Acjelen 02:09, 12 July 2006 (UTC)

July 9, 2006

  • Nomad: This entry gives the impression that nomadism and pastoralism are the same thing. Pastoralism or animal husbandry is a subsistence method, and nomadism is not, although the term is sometimes used as shorthand for pastoralism. However, any society which does not remain sedentary for a significant length of time is considered nomadic. This includes most hunter-gatherers, but the entry makes no indication of this. Also there is no logical organization of the information that is presented. An expert's contribution would be best.--Losecontrol | Losecontrol 22:52, 9 July 2006 (UTC)
  • Ostia: Interesting article about the ancient Roman port town; needs some moderate-to-heavy cleanup of syntax and spelling. Reads like a rough translation from another language. Dppowell 19:52, 9 July 2006 (UTC)
  • Sukyo Mahikari: religious article needs thorough cleanup to make encyclopedic (particularly, removal of extensive self-referential editorial comments). Tearlach 16:04, 9 July 2006 (UTC)
  • Ford Escort (European) - Needs a major update. --ApolloBoy 05:59, 9 July 2006 (UTC)
  • Pinch hitter: Needs spelling/red link fixing, confusing, needs to be made more encylcopledic. --Kfrogers 21:53, 9 July 2006 (UTC)

July 8, 2006

  • Richard III (1955 film) - This article has is up for a Feature Article designation, and needs to be copyedited by a skilled set of eyes. If you can copyedit, you are encouraged to take a look and help out! Thank you!--P-Chan 23:08, 8 July 2006 (UTC)

July 7, 2006

  • Night of the Living Dead - Would like a copy-editor and proofreader to go over article and make sure the prose is FA standard. Thanks. Dmoon1 06:38, 7 July 2006 (UTC)
  • Nijmegen Centre for Border Research - poorly constructed and written. Moriori 21:03, 7 July 2006 (UTC)
    • I attempted to give the article more structure and organization. Additionally, I made several minor punctuation/sentence structure adjustments. I think the article could use more attention from a more experienced editor, as I am a newbie! After that it may be ready for removal from this list...? Sonrisasgrandes 15:00, 8 July 2006 (UTC)

July 6, 2006

  • Young Turks - This article needs extensive grammar and phrasing improvement as well as clarification and reorganization of the information presented. Any English-proficient Turkish history experts in the house? - Siredwlynch 23:55, 6 July 2006 (UTC)
  • Manitoba Schools Question - Could use some reorganizing, more information, and a few more references. - Superwad 21:19, 6 July 2006 (UTC)
  • Ordovician-Silurian extinction events - Needs to be wikified, cleaned up a bit, and seperated into sections Superwad 16:23, 6 July 2006 (UTC)
  • Northrop N-9M - contradiction in crew number: "The first flight of the N-9M occurred on December 27 1942. On May 19 1943, it crashed, killing its pilot. The other crewmembers (co-pilot and flight engineer) escaped alive." and "Crew: one, pilot"
  • Johannite - Contains a contradiction as to whether this Gnostic group rejects Christ Elegy 19:15, 6 July 2006 (UTC)

July 5, 2006

  • Indian English - article takes a very patronising attitude to Indian English and a lot of bad English is being passed off as Indian English. Needs a lot of attention. - Cribananda 01:00, 6 July 2006 (UTC)
  • Children's Bible Hour - article content appears to be based on CBH website or other material (e.g., note use of "we"). Needs to be reworked so that it can function as an encyclopedic article.--Kfranco 14:46, 5 July 2006 (UTC)

July 4, 2006

  • Sveti-tskhoveli Cathedral - the previous Svetitskhoveli which was adequate if not brilliant has now been single-handedly moved to this title (on inexplicit grounds)- the original article is now lost and the replacement whilst full of detail is written in mangled English - is it possible to recover the original so that a proper edit can be done? - and is it possible to query the move now that it has been made?--Smerus 16:08, 4 July 2006 (UTC)
  • Bankruptcy in Canada and your Spouse - reads like an escapee from Uncyclopedia.

July 3, 2006

  • Emeril Live Article could use formatting/wikification, information on the sets have incorrect grammar, etc --Chiyocide 00:50, 4 July 2006 (UTC)
  • Nichola Holt Horrible article that reads like something off myspace but I'm not sure what should go and what should stay.
  • The Alien Legacy. Not immediately obvious if this is about the movies or games. And if the Quadrilogy came out later, does Legacy have 3 titles or the 4 listed.--J Clear 15:13, 3 July 2006 (UTC)
  • Mansour Bahrami. As noted on the talk page for this article, the body of the text has been copied wholly from a BBC news article and so violates copyright, I don't have any expert knowledge on Bahrami but perhaps tennis fans could do him justice! --Harmonica 18:52, 3 July 2006 (UTC)
  • Daisy Outdoor Products. Needs wikification; unordered miscellanious information about the company and their products.

July 2, 2006

June 2006

June 29, 2006

June 28, 2006

June 27, 2006

  • Ruben Iván Martínez Andrade - needs basic formatting, full sentences and sources. Is he a first division player and is any other type even notable? - MacGyverMagic|MacGyverMagic 10:37, 28 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Spring Valley, Washington, D.C. - The section on the chemical weapons needs a little work. - bolesjohnb
  • Dave Mustaine - This article is really hard to follow. Many of the sentences have multiple objects. There is no order to the paragraphs other than a chronological breeze through Dave's life. There are lots of facts, but none of it has context or meaning. 67.49.249.169 02:02, 28 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Use of death penalty worldwide:
    1. The following claim has been added to the article: "Federal law provides the death penalty for drug trafficking, although no prosecution has ever been brought under that provision." Could somebody verify existence of this law? See my comment at the talk page.
    2. The map (Image:DeathPenaltyWorldMap.JPG), as well as its Commons version (Image:Death Penalty World Map.png), is incorrect: Belarus did use capital punishment in 2004, and so it doesn't constitute a country abolitionist in practice. - Mike Rosoft 09:59, 27 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Banasthali Vidyapith - Marking as an article which reads like an advertisement, particularly since it is -- it's based (with apparent permission) off the school's promotional brochure. Also, it has no links and is missing much of the standard information (like quality information on academic programs) one would expect from a university article. Likely needs someone from India or who is personally familiar with the institution to tackle it. - Beginning 01:02, 28 June 2006 (UTC)

June 26, 2006

June 25, 2006

  • Guillaume - Needs descriptions, templates, and categories. Mo-Al 06:11, 25 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Oswego, Illinois - Paragraphs need formatting. As wells the pictures. --Mjvan12 08:34, 25 June 2006 (UTC)
    • I tried to re-organize the second section to make it easier to read. I'm not exactly sure what it needs... I have a feeling it will involve making the lists into readable texts, but I'm not sure how to do that. Sonrisasgrandes 20:40, 8 July 2006 (UTC) :)
  • Tyler Courtroom Shooting - Needs complete rewrite; please see Tyler Courtroom Shooting - Hedgey42 09:01, 25 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Filial piety - Article was translated from Chinese and has a number of common Chinese translation issues. Needs copyediting. --Daduzi Daduzi 18:11, 25 June 2006 (UTC) A number of editors have worked on the article and it's now fine. --Daduzi Daduzi 17:50, 8 July 2006 (UTC)
  • Dancing Beijing - Same issues as above. --Daduzi Daduzi 18:17, 25 June 2006 (UTC)

June 24, 2006

June 23, 2006

  • Clock Tower (series) - the video game series created by Capcom. It's a cult classic series and will get attraction towards it due to the announcement of the film. --Empty2005 02:18, 24 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Gangaji - more formal style? Jackiespeel 23:11, 23 June 2006 (UTC)
  • 1990s fads and trends Old article in which some sections use informal tones and generalizations. --Gray Porpoise 17:34, 23 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Gillian Lynne New article on notable subject. Plenty of material, but it needs organising and formatting.
  • Primerica Old article that's in a constant edit war by critics and supporters. Some previous versions have excellent info, but wading through the history takes time. 72.139.184.107 13:45, 23 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Narcissism (psychology), just decided to start adding citations and cleaning up a bit when I noticed that even the references in the text don't seem to match the text. I feel like I am looking at the tip of the iceberg and this article needs all the help it can get. There is an excellent section on the talkpage by Katana on reworking the article and to my mind the problem is all of that plus the fact that the existing text seems largely unreferenced or incorrectly referenced. Maybe a case for a total rewrite? It's an important page that should be retained and maintained to a far higher standard than this.--Zeraeph 22:31, 23 June 2006 (UTC)

June 21, 2006

June 20, 2006

June 19, 2006

June 18, 2006

June 17 2006

  • Fisherian runaway This article is somewhat confusing and could also use some citations.
  • Transport in Cyprus This article is basically just a selection of facts and figures and needs reformatting and restructuring into sentences. --Daduzi Daduzi 05:59, 17 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Heritage tourism fails to define the context of heritage, confuses it with religious pilgrimage and needs a more global view--JBellis 11:39, 17 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Choo San Goh Horribly formatted, one large lump of text. K.vale 14:02, 17 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Miss Nana Incoherent main section. --Charlesknight 16:27, 17 June 2006 (UTC)

June 16, 2006

  • The "Origins and variations of the word" section in Werewolf is messy and seems like it needs more citations. --66.241.95.65 16:10, 16 June 2006 (UTC)

June 14, 2006

  • Wald (onomastics). No idea how to fix. -- User:Docu
  • Horse Article is long, disorganized and unwieldy. Also contains material already created in related subtopics. Repeats itself in several places, sometimes contradicts itself--probably in part due to length. Needs serious reorganization. Too much for one person to work on alone, especially someone as new as myself, needs people with good Wikipedia editing skills to create some new articles, merge sections of this article with existing ones, maybe expand the disambiguation page. Or make suggestions on the Horse page. This page also has been having some minor problems with vandalism. Montanabw 18:46, 14 June 2006 (UTC)

June 12, 2006

June 11, 2006

I fixed up the introduction with a major rewrite, but the rest of the article needs cleanup from a referreed source. Decadencecavy 04:55, 16 June 2006 (UTC)

June 10, 2006

  • Lalitaditya Muktapida - This article needs just some general editing (i.e. correction of spelling/grammatical errors) and also perhaps more research (Only one page out of one history book is cited).
  • Montreal hot dog- This stub is hard to look at, its so damn messy.--GorillazFan GorillazFanAdam 03:49, 11 June 2006 (UTC)

  • Cult film - the article used to be pretty good. Now, it's a total mess! (Ibaranoff24 19:06, 10 June 2006 (UTC)) - It should be better now. Someone should, however, have a second look at it (17:22, 24 June 2006 (UTC))
  • Mundelein - "Also in 2005/2006 Mundelein has began to flourish. Many corperations have made their way into this suburb, such as Staples, TJ Max (and more), the amazing SUPER Target, White Castle, Pay Less Shoes, Pier 1 Imports, Fine Liquors, Jimmy Johns, Little Ceasars, Pet Supplies Plus, Home Depot, and Applebee's (which unfortunately had poor service upon its grand opening). It is apparent that Mundelein is booming and should no longer be considered a "bedroom" community." This paragraph seems somewhat biased, especially the comment on Applebee's service. Political Mind 00:42, 11 June 2006 (UTC)

June 9, 2006

  • Primark -- article has been hacked around by various people and now has sentences out of place and is in general need of help!
  • have cleaned up some sentences and removed advertising claim Mike33 13:43, 11 July 2006 (UTC)
  • Demetri Martin -- quite a of bit unencyclopedaic prose and uncited reports.
  • Social War - Confusing structure, needs more sections and better organization, no references at all. Red1 07:09, 9 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Ian Allan Publishing - Blatant advert. Tivedshambo 07:11, 9 June 2006 (UTC)

June 8, 2006

  • Vitamin D - Article is confusing and is also missing information and explanations, I'm unsure which cleanup tag to use, but it definitely needs one. LuNatic 03:48, 8 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Minyanville - Needs formal tone improvement and other grammatical help. (MVhughes 13:56, 8 June 2006 (UTC))
  • British Sign Language - added some sections as requested, but the sections on becoming an interpreter seem inappropriate in tone, sounding like a 'how-to' guide.Andrew Spinner 17:09, 8 June 2006 (UTC)

June 7, 2006

June 6, 2006

June 5, 2006

  • Jacob Calero - Article has a written account which provides good detail but it is a little informal and is missing standard structure. --Wootonius 19:20, 5 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Big Biz Tycoon - Article uses weasel words, awkard grammar, very little background information about the game. Green451 15:04, 5 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Nicole bennett has been subject to persistent vandalism for days. I have semi-protected the page. I managed to remove some clearly nonsensical content, but I am not sure if what stands is accurate. Needs immediate attention Chancemill 11:42, 5 June 2006 (UTC)

June 4, 2006

  • Objectivity (philosophy) is confused, uncited, poorly written, and poorly formatted. It is a rewrite of the disambiguity page for objectivity. Much of the content is erroneous as well as irrelevant to the specific nature of the article title.

June 3, 2006

  • Anna Phoebe is a blatant advertisement and needs to have sections. Jman14141414 00:51, 4 June 2006 (UTC)
    • I rewrote it some to make it more clear and less POV, but it is still largely plagiarized from it's only source. --Mo-Al 23:59, 4 June 2006 (UTC)

June 2, 2006

June 1, 2006

K.vale 05:49, 1 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Joe Louis Arena need to be divided into sections, and almost completely rewritten. Right now it is just a random assortment of facts Grhs126student 17:32, 1 June 2006 (UTC)

May 2006

May 31, 2006

May 30, 2006

  • Bulimia nervosa is badly in need of some expert input and serious restructuring / editing. - Vaughan 10:37, 30 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Martha Washingtonians is badly in need of some expert input and serious restructuring and needs more sources. - Sajun777 11:17, 30 May 2006 (UTC)
  • John Brown Russwurm - Unwikified, contains a lot of vanity content. - Mike Rosoft 19:18, 30 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Mandy (Billy and Mandy) needs to be proofread, rephrased, and reorganized. Currently the biography section is unfocused and rather random. Perhaps break it up into sections? LordSarir 19:30, 30 May 2006 (UTC)

May 29, 2006

  • Floricienta - I made a lot of changes, added a side bar etc but this article still needs a LOT of attention, preferably from someone who knows a bit about the content as well.
  • Gus Fink - Perhaps a fairly notable artist (at least, makes a claim of notability), but the article is unwikified and contains a lot of unencyclopedic material. - Mike Rosoft 09:27, 29 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Marion College, Missouri - Notable as a former college, but like many former college articles, it's totally out of format. I've done a lot of these as of late and frankly would like a bit of a break. Sorry. :/ Beginning 23:00, 29 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Thirty most populous cities in the world - Article is of dubious content. Needs attention.--68.236.5.240 02:13, 30 May 2006 (UTC)

May 28, 2006

  • The Open Boat and Other Tales - Much of this makes no sense and is written in the first person.
  • Marshall Middle School (Pittsburgh) - Spelling is poor and it needs some work in general. I removed a number of non-NPOV comments and wikified the page.
  • Rule 144 - Makes little sense. In dire need of general cleanup, perhaps an entire re-write. Political Mind 15:51, 28 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Drawball - Needs more editors to clean it up, and keep it clean. See Drawball. The article is one of the worst on Wikipedia, entirely full of unencyclopedic unsourced subtrivia. Every time an experienced editor removes something, it's replaced with more online webforum dick wagging over who has the biggest picture. - HahncheneHahnchen 03:48, 28 May 2006 (UTC)
  • The X-Files - Contains way too many lists, which comprise roughly 1/3 to 1/2 of the page. A substantial amount of information on the page is fan speculation rather than sourced references. The show was important in the history of television, but the Wikipedia page has become a collection of fan trivia. Much of the information can be integrated into the rest of the page (with some effort). The page also needs reorganization. Zepheus 05:27, 28 May 2006 (UTC)
  • History of NHL - Unwikified, possibly copied from somewhere. - Mike Rosoft 08:48, 28 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Lyn Duff - Too many external links, unencyclopedic style, possibly copied from somewhere. - Mike Rosoft 08:52, 28 May 2006 (UTC)
  • List of Dukes of Alba - An anonymous user has changed María del Rosario Cayetana Fitz-James Stuart y Silva, 28th Duchess of Alba to María del Rosario Cayetana Fitz-James Stuart y Silva, 18th Duchess of Alba (and made a similar change for the previous one). I don't know whether the edit should be reverted as vandalism, or whether it is legitimate. - Mike Rosoft 17:45, 28 May 2006 (UTC)
  • DeltaAnime - Reads like an advertisment, many inaccurate facts are also listed in this page. Added more content.PhilGreen 14:06, 3 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Alonissos substantial chunks of the English are poor. Much ambiguous writing. Article discusses an island, a village, and a municipality with the same name in such a way that the reader is not sure which is being discussed. Needs general cleanup. Jd2718 21:00, 28 May 2006 (UTC)

May 27, 2006

May 26, 2006

  • Carola Unterberger-Probst Needs some grammar / style correction. I think the article is by a non-native English speaker or a computer translation? Rjwilmsi 08:11, 26 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Gopaldas Neeraj - Unwikified, possibly copied from somewhere, in any case the style is completely inappropriate and needs to be rewritten. - Mike Rosoft 08:28, 26 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Bratz (TV series) - A bit crufty and just needs a bit of a cleanup. Beno1000 16:13, 26 May 2006 (UTC)
  • CHIC (band) - In dire need of a complete rewrite/copyedit/formatting. --FuriousFreddy 01:52, 27 May 2006 (UTC)

May 25, 2006

May 23, 2006

  • Bibliography of the Penguin Should be "marched into" ;) a merger with relevant page(s) as purely a list Jackiespeel 16:25, 24 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Stewart McPherson lots of things wrong with this - broken images, loose html code, parts of articles pasted in the article, etc. --Awiseman 20:34, 23 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Bloodscalp Tribe - A tribe of World of Warcraft trolls. I have just removed a load of spam from the article (a long list of World of Warcraft guilds, complete with their websites). What is left is a substandard stub. Needs context etc. - Mike Rosoft 09:07, 24 May 2006 (UTC)
    • There is also Bloodscalp. I have formerly deleted it as a vanity page; now I think that some of its history may be useful to be merged into Bloodscalp Tribe. - Mike Rosoft 12:14, 24 May 2006 (UTC)

May 22, 2006

I rewrote it, however I could not find any sources.--Mo-Al 05:03, 26 May 2006 (UTC)

May 21, 2006

  • ChapStick - still needs some work (both expansion and cleanup)--Mo-Al 00:56, 22 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Chelsea boy - needs to include other definitions. Onishenko 20:43, 21 May 2006 (UTC)
  • American kestrel - Description section is potentially confusing with many redundancies. Algebra 18:13, 21 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Mirage Koas - Needs to be rewritten. States opinions and is full of grammatical errors. Ramzacloud 01:52, 22 May 2006 (UTC)

May 20, 2006

Definitely needs editing for NPOV, if not deletion- is this school notable? Cpastern 20:44, 25 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Hermann Raupach - Incompletely translated from Russian (possibly from Russian Wikipedia). I have just fixed the broken format. - Mike Rosoft 16:05, 20 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Nissan Figaro - Needs better formatting. --ApolloBoy 01:33, 21 May 2006 (UTC)
    • And an expert to boot. (I tried with the formating... just could not get the topic)Eagle 101 Eagle 101 03:31, 21 May 2006 (UTC)

May 19, 2006

  • Cal Ripken Written more like a magazine feature than an encyclopedia article. --Napthene 01:36, 19 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Palm Island, Queensland - poor layout. QazPlm 00:37, 19 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Sydney Ling - anyone care to kick this around a bit? There appears to be a grain of notability in there, but it needs a major fact-check for some fairly extravagant claims. Tearlach 00:33, 19 May 2006 (UTC)

May 18, 2006

  • Lives of the Twelve Caesars Long summary of the Julius Caesar section just added, unfortunately with illiteracies and misspellings. Has someone time to improve it? Andrew Dalby 09:16, 18 May 2006 (UTC)
Recast the "Influences Sources and veracity" paragraphs into single paragrapgh, "Veracity, criticism, and influences." MOved info about subjecetivity of Claudius section to "Veracity, critcism, and influences" section. Minor cleanup, typos. Minor cleanup Julius Caesar.Dlohcierekim 19:09, 18 May 2006 (UTC)

May 17, 2006

  • fr:Titre de noblesse///fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Titre_de_noblesse My French is not up to finding the relevant cleanup page - "summat fishy" going on with the pictures. (Can someone past as relevant please) Jackiespeel 15:48, 17 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Me and My Katamari - Various unencyclopedic comments have been added into the article, such as: "As always, the King sends the Prince to the Sunflower Continent, since it is full of stuff." - Mike Rosoft 18:28, 17 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Contract killing - mainly poor grammar, and I removed the unencyclopedic line "Examples of contract killing can be found in the fictitious series, the Alex Rider Series, only in certain books, by Anthony Horowitz." 70.68.181.189 03:34, 18 May 2006 (UTC)

May 16, 2006

-I've proposed that this article be incorporated into 'Chrono Cross'.I'll wait a few days, and if no-one has any complaints I'll merge them. Bosola 15:12, 3 July 2006 (UTC)
I've incorporated this article into Serge (Chrono Cross) Bosola 20:41, 8 July 2006 (UTC)

May 15, 2006

  • Uniform Crime Reports - In addition to expansion, the Index crime section is overly long and poorly formatted. The criticism sections should either be merged or defined separately. CRobey 17:35, 15 May 2006 (UTC)

May 14, 2006

  • Carlos Salinas- POV everywhere, along with a very informal voice. There may be some basic spelling and grammatical mistakes as well.
  • Ramona article's summary is poorly written and could use some more information.
  • Daniel Coburn article is very poorly written and does not conform to BIO standards. Also used to include lots of POV.

May 13, 2006

  • Toyota Supra - Way too convoluted and some of the words need to be decapitalized. --ApolloBoy 00:02, 14 May 2006 (UTC)
I have attempted the cleanup, but it may still need attention from an expert in order to simplify what is being said, but I have got rid of repetition, grammar errors, stylistic errors and the like. --Knucmo2 10:31, 14 May 2006 (UTC)

May 9, 2006

  • WCBI-TV - I can live with the first two sections... but everything below that needs to be looked at and/or overhauled. It seems like the article just dabbles way too much in minutiae. Amnewsboy 23:49, 9 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Spring holiday – I created this article, I'm somewhat emotionally involved in the subject. Would like some help with POV and organization. The article is very professionally collaberated, though, with alot of citations. Also would like some input on a possible article name change. — CrazyInSane`CrazyInSane`Contributions/CrazyInSane 04:02, 9 May 2006 (UTC)

May 8, 2006

  • Sex, Toys & Chocolate - Ardenn marked this page for cleanup without reason. I've changed the wording slightly in the description, and cleaned up the episode list a bit. I'm still waiting for confirmation that the episode order presented is accurate.--Superwad 00:49, 7 June 2006 (UTC)

May 7, 2006

I wikified some of it, but the page still needs attention. Hopefully I've provided a good enough start - Superwad 04:31, 5 July 2006 (UTC)

May 6, 2006

May 5, 2006

May 4, 2006

  • Pope Sixtus IV - References do not support article; in particular, I cannot find any references for the claim that Pope Sixtus IV was either of Jewish ancestry or secretly a practicing Jew. Adambondy 10:14, 5 May 2006 (UTC)

May 1, 2006

  • Longship - the article has a lot improved due to recently added material and subsequent editing for accuracy. However, it is far from what it could be (a great featured article), and needs more attention for language, factual accuracy, and structure. Cleanup tag originally added by Grumpy444grumpy, but I fully agree.--Stephan Schulz 11:38, 1 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Bully - The article was a bit of a mess to begin with, but has suddenly been dominated by a couple of well meaning, agenda driven, newbies. It needs some input from experienced editors to get it into shape --Zeraeph 20:37, 1 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Workplace bullying - At first glance this looks like a good article, until you realise nothing is cited or referenced and the whole piece may well be POV. --Zeraeph 20:37, 1 May 2006 (UTC)

April 2006

April 30, 2006

  • Visoko - Poor grasp of English; seems to have NPOV problems (sounds like inappropriate support for an archeological issue.) Adambondy 10:21, 30 April 2006 (UTC)
  • Nipponisation - Messy. May not be the correct term for the phenomenon. See talk page. -Seventh Holy Scripture 01:02, 30 April 2006 (UTC)
  • Kulachi - I did some minor wikifying and typo correction, but it needs grammatical improvements, possibly some rewriting as well, and I don't know the subject at all (got there via "Random article"). Jamoche 08:05, 30 April 2006 (UTC)

April 28, 2006

  • Modern Spain seems to be little more than the succeding election results after 1978, and the whole article needs cleaning.
  • Ardengus needs working on to make it more encyclopedic, and needs much more information in the article-- right now the bibliography is longer than the main article itself! Ekedolphin 06:50, 28 April 2006 (UTC)
  • Tadeusz Piechura needs some major, major clean-up work done on it-- in fact it's arguably an AFD candidate as it just seems to be a list of awards the person has won, and doesn't really help to indicate his notability. Ekedolphin 23:43, 28 April 2006 (UTC)

April 27, 2006

  • Aesthetic Realism needs a serious cleanup. It seems to have been a battleground of an edit war in the past, and has received little attention after being unprotected to make it less rife with mudslinging from both sides and more encyclopaedic. Beek man 19:18, 27 April 2006 (UTC)

April 26, 2006

  • Foreign relations of Afghanistan is very much out of date. It mainly involves the Taliban's relations with neighboring countries and mentions little about the changed relations since the fall of Afghanistan, especially with relation to Pakistan and the United States. I may have time to eventually get around to it. Helmandsare 17:35, 26 April 2006 (UTC)
  • Alex Glasgow isn't terribly well written, and is lacking references and sources. It could also do with rearranging into a more logical order. I don't know enough about the subject though to do it myself though. DWaterson 19:39, 26 April 2006 (UTC)

April 23, 2006

April 21, 2006

April 18, 2006

  • Volkswagen Gol - This is a total mess with far too many pictures... --ApolloBoy 05:12, 18 April 2006 (UTC)
    • I took some pictures off the top thing, but the bottom can still use some cleanup, and I didn't check the article itself much. Blackcanoflysol
    • Removed most of the images, leaving only one example of each model. All the images remani in the code, but will not appear in the article. Alexvickers
  • Gahlot needs cleaning up. It's written very much from an insider perspective, it contains too much jargon to inform the unknowing reader. Aecis Contributions/AecisAecisAecis/Userboxes 20:32, 18 April 2006 (UTC)

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July 14, 2006

Carinthian is NOT, has never been and will never be a slovenian dialect. The dialect stemms from Bavaria.

 

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